Post by sontaran on Apr 25, 2008 11:14:27 GMT
This is my second fan fiction story and I hope it is an improvement to my first.I would love to know what you think and you might have noticed that my stories are a bit short but that is because there is some work to catch up on. I have posted this story before but am reposting it as part of a set.
BTW,When I say second I have done another story but not posted here due to it being to short and pretty dumb.
I hope everyone will post in this new board and that it will have a bright future.
I have written storys 1 and 3 each with 3 parts but this could possibly change to 5 for the second story. E-space is coming soon!
As the bright orange sky of Gallifrey shone down on the high dome surround the parliament, the Timelord high council arranged a meeting to discuses the previous days murder. “Today we have assembled here to talk about the incident and the fact that our DNA traces detect it was a Timelord who had pulled it off.” “We have had renegades over the time of our history but nun as cunning as the Master.” Maxil, the guard turns towards the president with a slight frown. “We actually know that the one called Master was last seen on the planet Earth leading Cheetah like people but was destroyed.” “Surely you have some video footage of what happened last night?”
“We detected a mark three Tardis land but it was said to be non hostile.” Meanwhile the Doctor just set the controls of the Tardis to Gallifrey as he lay back in his chair as he contemplated telling the Timelords about his previous battle with the Master. He was very rarely alone but for a great length of time he had no companion or someone to stay and help him fight the evils of the universe. “See that the DNA tracer is working and try to get a signal from the Masters Tardis. The Master who was now brittle and weak after the eye of harmony nearly absorbed him completely. He noticed a slight red flicker on the Tardis console witch was his added warning device should someone try and detect him. He knew that he now hat only one option. If he were to survive and remain unseen by the Timelords he must use the Watch witch would rewrite his biology and turn him human and crate a false Timeline on Earth so it would be like he was always there. “Link to Tardis has failed commander but it was established but not long enough to gain any details. The Doctor landed the Tardis quite smoothly on Gallifrey. “Commander we have traced a new Tardis witch appears to be the Doctors. “Excellent Maxil! He will of great help to us, as he knew the Master better then any of us. As the Master took one final look at his Tardis he pulled the leaver witch would soon rewrite his biology! “We, the high council believe that the Master has now created a false Timeline to hide on Earth.” The Doctor goes to the high council doorway when he notices a quick scream followed by a powerful puff of dust.
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TO BE CONTINUED........(Very soon, )
PLEASE GIVE ME A COMMENT OR A REPLY!
:BEHIND THE WRITERS MIND:
Originally this story was to be called the final triumph and was to feature the Master as the main evil and to have human like androids implanted in Gallifrey somewhere by the Master.
The story line changed to the Master only being slightly involved and the Autons as the main evil.
So far I have written all the episodes and I can tell you that Autons will even be politicians at a point!
I can assure you that the next episode and beyond will be longer and sorry about this bad episode as I had a whole different story in mind and changed it all at the last second!